“If you
are not the hero of your own story, then you're missing the whole point of your
humanity.” A quote by Steve Maraboli accurately portrays the contemporary life
of a hero that we all can have the opportunity to achieve. The story Beowulf is
quite riveted with seemingly impossible feats to most readers but when asked to
compare it to a single contemporary hero, I found it rather difficult until it
hit me that the comparison of humanity would amass to Beowulf staggering feats
and heroic tendencies. The core instances of this shoot from the common grunt
defending his or her country, to the politicians fighting a heroic battle of their
own accord, and finally the average person being sufficiently mandible to
design themselves as the heroes of their path.
The
common foot solider on the front line defending his country may be considered a
pawn to a master scheme but is honestly in the same category as Beowulf who saw
the charge to perform heroic deeds and answered the call to defend what they
believe is right with the self-interest to reap the moral and stature heightening
rewards. The comparison personally seems logical but some can argue how a foot solider
wouldn’t be able to fight Grendel and other legendary behemoths however they
can perform breathtaking deeds on the battle field such as taking down a AH-64
Apache with a common rifle and in this sense it seems the common foot solider
and Beowulf are one in the same. Though what actually classifies heroicness as
combat oriented acts what about the heroic prowess of words?
The
power of words seem to be underestimated throughout the course of time and most
could argue of how actions speak louder than words but then that would mean
people like Martian Luther King Jr’s
actions were in vain when in actuality they were some of the most efficacious in
the pursuit of liberty. Both Beowulf and Martian Luther king Jr fought for the
freedom of their people one against the sovereignty of malicious monstrosities and
the other against the brute known as racism though Beowulf used combat skills
he was just as vocal in inspirational speeches that showered upon his followers
as Martin Luther King Jr was. The idea that actions or words make you a hero sounds
fairly preposterous because in truth there is another way to become a hero.
The ultimatum
that not many people see because they choose to be blind to it, thinking they
have no true purpose and let others build up their purpose for them is that
anyone is the hero of their own accord but most don’t notice this and sadly
disregard the call that beckons them to be something more. Beowulf heard his
call and he sprang for it, firmly believing in his path and could be compared
to any one of us who choose to ignore are limitations or bonds that hold us to
follow others. At the start of any day anyone can be a hero all you have to do
is tower over the darkness that convolutes the light to becoming great and once
there you can decide how to preach your heroic manner whether it be actions,
word, or maybe something completely outlandish such as a person with a dream.
This quote should suffice in what the contemporary hero should live by “Don't be
held back by someone else's bullshit in fake memories. The one path you chose
for yourself is the truth of your universe.”
I found it interesting that you compared Beowulf to humanity in general. The essay also had a good variety of vocabulary. I liked your essay and thesis overall. For your information, you said "Martian" for Martin Luther King in the 3rd paragraph.
ReplyDeleteI liked how you said anyone can be a hero. I would expand on the part where some people don't take up the call with an example or two.
ReplyDeleteI think this essay was a little too broad in scope. It got kind of weird in parts, jumping from an AH-64 Apache to "Martian" Luther King Jr. But the structure was good. In my opinion you usually shouldn't open with a quote but that one is relevant to your thesis so you're probably good. If you could maybe focus on one topic a little more or just connect it a little bit more, I think that would improve it.
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